some say the purpose of education is to prepare individuals to be useful to society. others say the Purpose of education is to help people achieve personal ambitions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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sector is a place where “Pebbles are polished and diamonds are dimmed” itself signifies the importance of

education

. Some segments of

society

reckon that the Main intention of

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schooling should

be become

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a perfect citizen;

however

, counterparts of the

society

insist that it should be intended to fulfil our dreams. There are split opinions regarding

this

topic, though both have their pros and cons as per everyone's perspective.

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before commenting on any decision , both opinions would be discussed. To embark on, there is no doubt for some people who think that it is essential to our country by increasing the number of educated people. If students get life lessons in their initial period of life, it would be extremely helpful in their adult life to survive in

this

competitive world.

for example

, in Japan, all citizens obey the rules properly because their primary aim of the study is to make a child a better person.

Therefore

, the crime rate and offensive activities have been seen very seldom in

this

country.

Thus

, the rudimentary goal of

education

should be

society

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oriented. Why

education

should be helpful for individuals to achieve their goals? The underlying reason behind

this

is that they can acquire something in their lives by their desirous nature because it is the one type of motivation and without

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people would not start the business and research. These types of fundamental information they get by attending schools and universities. And

also

they get the opportunity to earn more money as it is more essential in

this

fast-moving world.

for instance

, various studies Conducted in the USA confirmed that Seventy per cent of individuals obtain their interesting Professions by attending schools every year.

Thus

, it would not only help to finish their work at

encourage

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them to go towards their dream. In conclusion,

although

both sides of the importance is having their own merits, I would say that

education

should pay more focus to

making

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children decent and helpful members of

society

because if they become useful nationalists

then

eventually they can accomplish their ambitions.

That is

why I think that course of study plays an indispensable role to become a royal person for the world.