Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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admissions has been a trending topic lately, along with the inclusion of

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year's legislative priority list. In the aforementioned bill, it is proposed that colleges must admit the same proportion of men and

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. Generally, I am of

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is admissible as it would accelerate the

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efforts, but some reservations would need to be made to prevent possible imbalances in the future.

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is one of the best tools universities have to promote

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and ensure that those who are

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shut out of the nation’s postsecondary system have a chance to earn a quality degree. For much of our nation’s history, elite universities were largely reserved for wealthy, predominantly male. The current male and female students’ ratio is 65:45, and the gap is even bigger in some certain majors, particularly the STEM department. Affirmative action

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as the proposed sex-based

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entrance selection is not something new. Soon after the Reformation Era in

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90s, parliament has introduced a similar

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for the election, which requires

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to enlist at least 30%

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legislative

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participation at the parliament has risen significantly, where 23% of the congress members are now

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, tripled the 1997 number where the parliament only had 7%

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should be decided prudently. It could lead to a new unwanted injustice as it may

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of their best

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opportunity. It may

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lead to students, particularly

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, demotivation as they may lose hope in their chance to get their best possible education. Details

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as whether the above proposal applies to all majors in all colleges, what is the ideal

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ratio, and how long the referred affirmative action proposal will be applied must be carefully determined. In conclusion, I believe that the

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admission

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is a good bid towards achieving the

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goal.

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should decide

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topic very carefully, as several limitations will need to be made to avert any possible unintended consequences in the future.