Some people have argued that there will be no need for art galleries in the future because people can view works of art freely on the internet. Compare and contrast the benefits of viewing art in real life with viewing it on the internet. In your opinion, which is better? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

DEPENDING ON RECENT TECHNOLOGICAL DEVELOPMENTS, IT IS ARGUED THAT PEOPLE WILL PREFER TO EXPLORE THE WORLD OF
ART
VIA
INTERNET
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THE INTERNET
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WITH
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AT
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NO CHARGE,
INSTEAD
OF PHYSICALLY VISITING
ART
GALLERIES OR MUSEUMS.
FURTHERMORE
, IT IS CLAIMED THAT
ART
GALLERIES AND MUSEUMS WILL BE UNNECESSARY IN THE FUTURE.
THIS
ESSAY WILL EXPLAIN WHY I DISAGREE WITH
THIS
STATEMENT AND WHAT ARE THE REASONS
OF
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FOR
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THIS
DECISION.
FIRST
OF ALL, MUSEUMS OR GALLERIES ARE NOT JUST BUILDINGS TO DISPLAY SOME IMPORTANT PIECES. THESE BUILDINGS CREATE AN ENVIRONMENT FOR PEOPLE TO SOCIALIZE WITH OTHER PEOPLE HAD
SAME
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THE SAME
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INTERESTS OR EXPERTS
ON
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IN
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THAT FIELD,
MOREOVER
, GIVE HUMAN BEINGS
CHANCE
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A CHANCE
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TO FEEL THE
ART
THROUGH THEIR FIVE SENSES.
FOR INSTANCE
, DURING A PHOTOGRAPH
EXHIBITON
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EXHIBITION
TOUR, IT CAN BE MET WITH
PHOTOGRAPHER
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THE PHOTOGRAPHER
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AND
LISTENED
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TOLISTENED
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THE STORIES BEHIND OF SHOOTS FROM THE
FIRST
MOUTH
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MONTH
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.
IN ADDITION
, THE PHOTOGRAPHS MAY BE FULLY APPRECIATED, THANKS TO BACKGROUND TUNES OR
ODOR
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THE ODOR
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OF
ROOM
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THE ROOM
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IN WHICH ARE CHOSEN BY PHOTOGRAPHERS.
ON THE OTHER HAND
, VISITING HISTORICAL OR ARTISTIC PLACES WITH THE
USING
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USE
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OF
INTERNET
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THE INTERNET
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CAN ENLARGE THE
AMOUNT
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NUMBER
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OF VISITORS DUE TO FREE ENTRANCE AND NO PHYSICAL REPLACEMENT REQUIRED. DESPITE TO THESE ADVANTAGES,
THIS
ONLINE EXPERIENCE CAN NOT REPLACE WITH BEING IN THE SAME AMBIANCE WITH THE
ART WORKS
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ARTWORKS
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.
IN ADDITION
TO LACK OF SENSATION, THERE IS AN INFORMATION POLLUTION ON WEBSITES. TO ILLUSTRATE, AT THE BEGINNING OF ISOLATION, IT WAS FREE TO VISIT LOUVRE MUSEUM ONLINE FOR ONE DAY AND NEEDLESS TO SAY I IMMEDIATELY SUBMITTED
TO
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IT TO
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WEBSITE
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THE WEBSITE
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. BUT I HAVE TO ADMIT IT WAS NOT IMPRESSED ME BECAUSE OF
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THE ABSENT
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ABSENT
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ABSENCE
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A
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OF A
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TOUR GUIDE, LACK OF SENSATIONS
SUCH
AS SMELL OR HEARING OF THE ATMOSPHERE. TO CONCLUDE, DESPITE
OF
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THE EXCLUSIVE OPPORTUNITIES IT PROVIDES, SINCE
ART
LOVERS WILL CONTINUE TO COME TOGETHER IN BUILDINGS OR PLACES IN THE FUTURE, ONLINE EXPERIENCE WILL NEVER TAKE OVER PHYSICAL TOUR.
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