In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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Educational institutes in most nations go through serious issues with the conduct of their students.

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with, poor discipline at home is the main cause

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and it starts from the home. Most children grow up in homes where they lack training and they grow up having no solid sense of what is right and wrong, they become insolent and resentful towards their peers and even authorities. These

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from parents who neglect their duties and those who create no time because they are after material things.

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, a recent study by Cambridge University found that 1 in 3 teenagers would refuse to comply with a rule if they didn't agree with it compared to just 1 in 8 in a similar study in 1990.

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. When youngsters get into schools they mix up with other students and if they can be easily influenced by others

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there is a problem of developing bad habits. Public awareness campaign and sensitization is the most viable solution. The government can help by sponsoring movements that

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of the danger of

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. The authority is able to use all means of communication to reach lots of people, who would become more aware of the situation and strive to make changes.

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, the UK recently lobbied their citizens to teach their children about the importance of respecting teachers and

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resulted in a dramatic improvement.

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Topic Vocabulary:

parental guidance
discipline
moral guidance
social media
detrimental
bullying
peer pressure
overcrowded
disengagement
disruptive behavior
behavioral policies
code of conduct
parental involvement
social and emotional learning (SEL)
empathy
responsible decisions

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In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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some people think that it would be better for large companies to move to regional areas outside large urban centres. Do you think the advantages outweight the disadvantages?

In today’s world, private companies rather than the government pay for and conduct most scientific research. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

More and more people claim that modern work patterns are a source of stress. What do you think are the causes of this? Can you suggest some possible solutions?

Even though globalization affects the world’s economies in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss.