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In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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Educational institutes in most nations go through serious issues with the conduct of their students.
This
 situation has root causes and solutions which will be discussed in
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To begin
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 and it starts from the home. Most children grow up in homes where they lack training and they grow up having no solid sense of what is right and wrong, they become insolent and resentful towards their peers and even authorities. These
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 from parents who neglect their duties and those who create no time because they are after material things.
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, a recent study by Cambridge University found that 1 in 3 teenagers would refuse to comply with a rule if they didn't agree with it compared to just 1 in 8 in a similar study in 1990.
In addition
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this
, bad
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 can
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 arise from
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. When youngsters get into schools they mix up with other students and if they can be easily influenced by others
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 there is a problem of developing bad habits. Public awareness campaign and sensitization is the most viable solution. The government can help by sponsoring movements that
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 of the danger of
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. The authority is able to use all means of communication to reach lots of people, who would become more aware of the situation and strive to make changes.
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, the UK recently lobbied their citizens to teach their children about the importance of respecting teachers and
this
 resulted in a dramatic improvement.
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  • parental guidance
  • discipline
  • moral guidance
  • social media
  • detrimental
  • bullying
  • peer pressure
  • overcrowded
  • disengagement
  • disruptive behavior
  • behavioral policies
  • code of conduct
  • parental involvement
  • social and emotional learning (SEL)
  • empathy
  • responsible decisions
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