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People will buy a product if it has quality or fulfill their needs. There is no need for advertisement and considered as a form of entertainment. Do you agree or disagree with it.

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The demand for a
product
 is directly concerned with its
quality
 and depends on how useful for the users. It is not required advertisements to let
customers
 know about their goods if the products are well-known in the market.I strongly agree with the statement that if a
product
 is good and it would be fulfilled their needs in
customers
' thought, it is no need to launch the
product
 introduction and
customers
 will look for the
product
.
To begin
 with, basically, a
product
 well-known brand is not required to advertise and express their
product
 because ,in the market,
people
 are accepting its
product
quality
. If the goods reached
this
 type of level, buyers would not care about the price of it. As a clear example to point out, the Ferrari brand car was never advertised in the market because
people
 know about its
quality
. Another reason is
people
 used to buy the products when they feel that it will be useful for their daily life. Especially, kitchenware and household products are normally useful items for housewives.
For instance
, a washing machine, nowadays,
this
 is a very essential item for lady
customers
 because it helps a lot of time and human energy save. That kind of
product
 does not need to introduce much to the
people
. They definitely search and purchase it. To sum up, when the
product
 has
quality
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the quality
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 and is useful in buyers' view, it is no need to promote and describe the merchandise.
Customers
 will come to look for it automatically.
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