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People will buy a product if it has quality or fulfill their needs. There is no need for advertisement and considered as a form of entertainment. Do you agree or disagree with it.

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The demand for a
product
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 is directly concerned with its
quality
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 and depends on how useful for the users. It is not required advertisements to let
customers
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 know about their goods if the products are well-known in the market.I strongly agree with the statement that if a
product
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 is good and it would be fulfilled their needs in
customers
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' thought, it is no need to launch the
product
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 introduction and
customers
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 will look for the
product
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.
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 with, basically, a
product
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 well-known brand is not required to advertise and express their
product
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 because ,in the market,
people
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 are accepting its
product
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quality
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. If the goods reached
this
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 type of level, buyers would not care about the price of it. As a clear example to point out, the Ferrari brand car was never advertised in the market because
people
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 know about its
quality
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. Another reason is
people
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 used to buy the products when they feel that it will be useful for their daily life. Especially, kitchenware and household products are normally useful items for housewives.
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, a washing machine, nowadays,
this
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 is a very essential item for lady
customers
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 because it helps a lot of time and human energy save. That kind of
product
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 does not need to introduce much to the
people
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. They definitely search and purchase it. To sum up, when the
product
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 has
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quality
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 and is useful in buyers' view, it is no need to promote and describe the merchandise.
Customers
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 will come to look for it automatically.
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