Some experts say for road safety cyclists should pass a test before being allowed on public roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some experts say for road safety cyclists should pass a
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before being allowed on public roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree? It is inevitable that there are lots of accidents growing more and more
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in these days.
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, it is suitable to overcome a
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before permitting vehicularpermitting of vehicular traffic on public roads. I totally agree with
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just a limited amount of
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use
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bicycle bicycle
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several reasons,
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ranging from losing an extra fee for the
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driving riding
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licence licence
to gradually reducing
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a number of
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using
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bicycles cycle
.
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, they not only have to spend money on practising fundamental rules to get over the exam but riders
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prepare for practice
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driving.
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the price is not considerable, they suppose it to be time-consuming and have complicated administrative formalities. For
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, a fraction of
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will transfer or replace bicycles
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other means of transportation. Meanwhile, nowadays the stimulation of using friendly-environmental vehicles is indispensable but because of a
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, the
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fails to
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policy. DespiteDesspite the aforementioned argumentsargumentsarguements, according to my aspect, I support regulations and safety measures partly because of diminishing unexpected accidental cases and partly because of raising the
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responsibility of traffic participants. Rules are promulgated to protect cycle users from legal liability when accidents happen.
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, one who crashes into another
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vehicle vehicles
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will be judged to get
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punishment punishment
from traffic police. From
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way, it raises driving awareness of
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during using transport. What’s more, riders should be responsible for their faults resulting from not obeying the law.
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appropriate lanes of other vehicles,
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, easily causes collisions and adequately receive
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. In conclusion, it
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to me that it would be better, on balance, for
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to set a threshold for
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to ensure the safety
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people
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using
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bicycles bicycle
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. It is understandable that some
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phenomenon but from my perspective, I advocate
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premise with a view given the aforementioned reasons.
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