You work for an international company. You want to attend special family celebration during working hours. You need to take time off work for this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter - Give details of family celebration - Tell your manager how much time time off work you need - Suggest how work can be done while you attend the celebration

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Dear
Mr.
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Singh, I am writing
this
letter to ask you to please help me because I
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want
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attend my family celebration in Brampton. My sister is getting engaged on
Wednesday
(March 20th) and
family
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want me there at my father's home for the
function
. Her wedding is
next
month in India and I am not going to the wedding so I want to be with my sister for her engagement
function
. I
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want
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leave on
Wednesday
as we have many things to do at the home. My schedule for
Wednesday
is in the evening shift and I already spoke to
Ms.
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Shami and she is going to do my shift job. She
suppose
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to join after her holiday on the 21st but for
me
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she is doing
favour
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and
join
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on
20th
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and
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me for my shift. So, please give me
holiday
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to go
for
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my
sister
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function
on
the
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Wednesday
. Since you have
week
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off you can
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come
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. Yours sincerely,
Harreet
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Harriet
Harpreet
Singh
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