You are arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend.In your letter. Explain the important event. Apologise for the situation. Suggest a new arrangements.

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Dear friend, How are you? I am writing

this

letter to let you know that I had to cancel my trip to Canada due to my brother's wedding in mid of March.

Moreover

, you know that as the elder sister I have many responsibilities for my brother's marriage. I am very sorry for the inconvenience it will cause you. I know that you had planned your vacations according to my visit to your country. Would it be possible if I pay a visit in the mid of may as I have all the month off? I would really appreciate it if you ask your boss to switch your holidays. You can feel free to call me. Best regards,

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6 paragraphs

118 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend.In your letter. Explain the important event. Apologise for the situation. Suggest a new arrangements.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Virtual reality be used as a tool for therapeutic interventions and mental health treatments. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, it is possible to move ocean creatures from their natural habitat at sea and have them relocated in amusement parks for the purpose of people’s recreation. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate school. Other, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.