You are arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend.In your letter. Explain the important event. Apologise for the situation. Suggest a new arrangements.

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Dear friend, How are you? I am writing

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letter to let you know that I had to cancel my trip to Canada due to my brother's wedding in mid of March.

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, you know that as the elder sister I have many responsibilities for my brother's marriage. I am very sorry for the inconvenience it will cause you. I know that you had planned your vacations according to my visit to your country. Would it be possible if I pay a visit in the mid of may as I have all the month off? I would really appreciate it if you ask your boss to switch your holidays. You can feel free to call me. Best regards,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

118 words

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