You work for an international company. You want to attend special family celebration during working hours. You need to take time off work for this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter - Give details of family celebration - Tell your manager how much time time off work you need - Suggest how work can be done while you attend the celebration

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Dear manager, I am writing

this

letter to let you know that I need some time due to my brother's wedding. What's more, I have a responsibility to make all the arrangements for the marriage party and invite all the guests.

Therefore

, I have no option than attending the function. My brother's wedding is on 15th March.

Moreover

, I need time to manage all the things and invite the guests. Overall I need time off from 5th March to 19th March. I know it will be hard to manage the work but I will make sure that I provide all the necessary training to the new staff.

This

will help to lessen the complications while I am on my vacation. I will be thankful to you. Best regards, Jogdeep

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

129 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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