Shopping habits depend more on your age group than anything else. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that people in different age ranges represent different purchasing practices.

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essay totally agrees with

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statement. I believe that younger generations tend to spend more

money

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on shopping than the older generation,

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because life standard has gotten higher and mainstream media is increasingly pushing their consuming agenda. Younger generations live wealthier with more choices for

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entertainment

and shopping available than there were in their

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or

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time. There are more

bussinesses

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businesses

right now than ever in the world, the economic and living standard

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improved compared to the past. More

money

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could

to

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be made and spent

nowsday

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nowadays

thanks to the incorporation of global

bussiness

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business

partnerships between countries. A recent report in Europe estimated a

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percent

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rise in

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spending among the youth compared to a

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thirty

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increase in the older age groups. The

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of social media and television usage in

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modern

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is changing our shopping habits. We are being surrounded by constant

advertisments

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advertisements

and suggestions to buy more and consume more.

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altered the mind of many people, especially the young ones who are exposed to social media and the internet all the time. Brands and

bussinesses

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businesses

pour

massive

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amount

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of

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into their marketing. Their advertisements are there to make the average people think that in order to be happy, they just need to buy the advertised products. Many of the friends I have made in school love to spend on fashion and electronic items. The bigger the brand the bigger their self-

esterm

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esteem

get boosted after the purchases. If Apple

anounce

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announce

announces

new Iphones for sale, there would be a very long line of customers, most of whom are teenagers and young adults camping and waiting for days

infront

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in front

of the store.

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, shopping habits vary based on different age ranges. The younger generations are more likely to spend than the older

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.

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is the result of higher living

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and the culture of

cumsumption

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consumption

.