‘Everybody should donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity.’ How far do you share this viewpoint?

Everyone ought to make a donation of a certain percentage of their earnings for endowment. I believe that giving to charity is

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benefaction,

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, not all people

could

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do

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, which means it depends on their opinion, wealth and earnings.

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essay will discuss the debatable topic. On the one hand, Almost everyone desires to help others who need support and aid. Unfortunately, in recent years, poverty is

increasing

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increasingly

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related to certain problems

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as education, health and economic situation. Especially, in underdeveloped or developing countries, a number of people work the whole day hard and they just

earned

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little money which is spent

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on

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their basic expenses. Even though they want to donate, there is no chance because of their limited wages. A

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issue related to the cost of modern living conditions

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as high tuition fees, medical care and consumer commodities.

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everyone is unique, they have different financial issues.

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, in my country, if the worker gets a higher salary, they have to pay high payroll tax and social insurance

deduction

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. After that, all expenses are paid by the net salary. Donating might be their choice and unless they do it, they will not hunks.

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, there are some people who are rich and get huge earnings but they do not make a donation

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their view. I feel those should donate to support charity and, in turn, can

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them good feelings and personal value.

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, it might lead to encourage their family,

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and

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friends to do the same.

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, It appears that some people’s salaries ought to be given to welfare, it would depend on their income level and passion

to help

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for helping

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others.