Some people feel that boarding schools ( where students or pupils live at the school during the term) are excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number reasons.

While
boarding
schools
are traditionally
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option, especially in
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Kingdom (UK), India, China, and parts of Africa. There are arguments on both sides of
this
very topical debate, and I will discuss them now. On the one
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those who support
of
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boarding
schools
cite
children
acquire plenty of
benefit
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. These range from communication skills,
creativity
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, and intellectual abilities. For example,
this
often
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quite competent teachers
are
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experts in their field.
In
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pupils will be able to get
good
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education, which may give them pretty good career opportunities
afterward
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.
Finally
,
this
is
also
known that many
children
may
can
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find friends for a lifetime, and they will stay in contact with each other.
By contrast
, opponents of view point out that boarding
schools
often have pretty high tuition fees. They
also
say that paying
this
sum of money will never be possible for a middle-class family.
Thus
, only quite privileged
children
from wealthy families might have the opportunity to attend those
schools
.
Furthermore
,
this
is depending on the character of pupils, boarding
schools
might not be the right way to go.
It is clear that
some
children
are not ready to leave their parents behind at a quite young age. And nurturers should consider
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whether their
children
have the characteristics and the mental strengths for
this
.
Overall
, it would appear that the decision to send the
children
to
the
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boarding
schools
should be based on family circumstances and child interest, rather than on
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view that it is
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excellent option for
children
.
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