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Fresh water has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem. What are the causes of the increased demand, and what measures can governments and individuals take to respond to this problem.

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In the modern
world
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, the scarcity of
freshwaterwater
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freshwater water
fresh water water
 has made it extremely demanding and is becoming a global problem.
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 an increase in
demand
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 and measures that can be taken by the
government
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 and individuals to combat
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 issue.
First
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 and foremost, freshwater has been a scarce
resource
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 in certain locations of the
world
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, but the increase in the
demand
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 for
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 a scarce
resource
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 has made
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 a worldwide issue.
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 is due to the drastic
population
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 growth that's been very apparent in many locations of the
world
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. As the
world
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population
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 continues to grow, the increased
demand
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 for
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 a scarce
resource
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 as
water
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 is inevitable.
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, countries like China and India have the largest
population
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 in the
world
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 but struggle to find freshwater as
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 resources can't keep up with the continued
demand
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 of
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 a large
population
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.
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, an increase in
population
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 can be the root cause of a growing
demand
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 for freshwater.
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, there are multifold measures that can be implemented by individuals and the
government
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 to respond to
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 a crisis.
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,
government
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 intervention like limiting the
water
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 usage for each household and penalising if they exceed the limits given.
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 but not the least, individuals can monitor their
water
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 usage to keep track and reduce unnecessary
water
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 usage like washing cars, long showers, etc.
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, Australia distributed each household with an hourglass that suggested people take short showers and banned washing cars with hoses.
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, many measures are available to combat
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 a phenomenon. In conclusion, with the increased
population
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 growth, the worldwide issue caused by increased
demand
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 and the shortage of a scarce
resource
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 like freshwater is inevitable.
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, with the aforementioned suggestion, methods like individual and
government
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 interventions to ensure that
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 a
resource
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 is available for the future must be implemented.
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