It is inevitable that as technology develops traditional cultures must be lost. Technology and tradition are incompatible – you cannot have both together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Technological development has been significantly changing the world

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over two previous decades. For years,

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development had been viewed as a positive phenomenon for the world, but recently people are taking a fresh look at it. It is argued that the

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and

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are being forgotten as

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result of it. It is noteworthy to bear in mind that each improvement has its own costs. I am completely in agreement with the above-said view. The following essay will overlook two means that

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technology can affect

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global

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has become plausible due to

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development.

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, the new means of communication and increase of interpersonal interactions resulted in

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of different

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generation will be brought up not only by the cultural beliefs of their parents but

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of their online peers which can cause a novel integral

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around the world with traits of all

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mean that the new one will be

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undesirable

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, the pure traditional

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will not exist anymore.

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defects that have been kept over hundreds of years due to human's lack of knowledge and countries' isolation.

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, marriage just after puberty is a traditional

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in some developing countries that are being banned after

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of healthcare and expansion of it in those countries by the technology.

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means that one of the fundamental aspects of families, which is marriage, is changing and can result in

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other changes in the way that they are living and raising their offspring as people

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more aware. To sum up, the evolution of traditional

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has

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as the technology is improving. The creation of the global

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and solving the defects of some

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are two consequences that are about to happen. I believe that these changes are inevitable and need to be guided in a way

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beneficial for humans.