Que: Environmental problems are too big for individual countries and individual people to address. We have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is to address it at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the view of the modern world, the environmental issue is notorious for humankind.

This

problem not only affects individuals

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but

also

a large number of

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countries

around the world;

thus

, comprehensive actions are needed in order to reduce the undesirable effects. In

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essay, I strongly agree an international collaboration is important to preserve

mother nature

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. First and foremost, environmental issues which affect one country can in the same way influence other

countries

.

For example

, in Indonesia, when Riau province in Sumatra Island experienced an immense bushfire in 2018, it produced massive smog which can harm other provinces and

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other

countries

such

as Singapore and Malaysia.

As a result

,

this

phenomenon injured the economic, social, and cultural activities of those

countries

.

In addition

, bushfires might develop inappropriate health issues for communities.

For Instance

, the carbon dioxide would lead to pneumonia, lung cancer, and other respiratory issues.

On the other hand

, global warming is a form of environmental issue on a wider scale and might affect all nations around the world.

For example

, the indirect impact

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a greenhouse effect may lead to an elevation of sea level worldwide;

thus

, many small islands will

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sink in 2100,

according to

the Global Research Foundation of America.

Hence

, a large number of people will lose their properties

as well as

their

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.

Therefore

,

this

issue can lead to a catastrophic event in the future if multinational movements do not take important action

such

as an emission agreement. In conclusion, all nations worldwide should have a sense of crisis to the environment and

likewise

should not neglect mother nature. The international agreement will decrease the negative impact in the future, as long as the local government and communities have a sense of crisis as well.