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Some people argue that fashion items cost too much money. Others say that this is acceptable because fashion is an important part of life.

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Some
people
 believe that fashionable
clothes
 cost too much
money
 , others disagree with
this
 opinion and say that fashion is an important part of life. On one hand, trendy
clothes
 that are made of good materials cost a lot of
money
 for some
people
. They are not ready to pay more
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that
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 100 dollars on a regular t-shirt and it is understandable
,
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 because every trend has a tendency to pass and after some time
clothes
 that were used to be trendy could be already out of the trend. If a person wants to keep up with trends he has to prepare a huge sum of
money
 and time to check all the new collections.
On the other hand
, some
people
 can say that keeping up with trends is sometimes useful
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because it will raise your social status or fashionable
clothes
 will make you look richer than you actually are. A lot of
people
 try to wear only fashionable
clothes
 because they rely on the opinion of
the
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society too much. Sometimes they are scared that somebody will think that they are old-fashioned or out of trend. I believe that each person should decide by himself what to wear and how much
money
 to spend on fashionable
clothes
. As for me, I wear only
clothes
 that look fancy in my eyes. I don’t care if they are fashionable or not. In conclusion, I would like to say that
people
 should make their own decisions in choosing
clothes
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 because choosing an outfit is a very individual thing.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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