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Although the prices of fuels have greatly increased over the last decade or two, it is argued that further increases in fuel prices are the only way to reduce world consumption of fuel and lessen pressure on the world's fuel resouces. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statatment?

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Nowadays,
fuel
 was provided from different sources and it is very convenient.
For example
, coal and oil. Our electricity and transport usually use
fuel
 of it. People use
fuel
 every day.But they did not know how to use it in a reasonable way. Sometimes
fuel
 was consumed. In my , opinion I support that the price increase can control the consumption of
fuel
. And we can
also
 develop another technology energy
instead
 of
fuel
. There is no doubt to say
fuel
 is used so fast in
this
 generation. Higher rate of
fuel
 used which lead to global warming and many different bad effects to the Earth. Global warming become forest fire frequency higher than before. I remember one of the forest fires was in Australia 2020. The fire had continued for a few months. North and South Pole were melted snow horribly in these 15 years. Many pole bears lose their habitat or are dead. People know they are responsible to face
this
 important problem. A new technology material developed by scientists.
That is
 efficiency and the cost is lower. It is
instead
 of traditional
fuel
.
Such
 as Tessa is using a new technology
fuel
.The car’s engine is silent and has faster speed.
On the other hand
, we have solar energy for choice. Just set up the solar equipment on the roof that can support the electricity and it is popular to need. Many businesses are deciding on their products that are using a new
fuel
. Because all of us understand
that is
 a new trend in the market. And another goal is to make a wonderful Earth for our
next
 generation.
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