The system used for rubbish collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to local council. In your letter Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours Suggest what should be done about the problem.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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with regard to raising my concern for my neighbourhood regarding the rubbish collection issue. In the past time, we have never faced

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kind of issue before. The rubbish collection trucks came regularly but I noticed recently that those are not collecting daily since a few weeks ago. Sometimes, it didn't appear for almost 2 to 3 days. As you know, our neighbours are near the central wet market.

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, if the trucks didn't come daily and were absent to collect, the rubbish became like a mountain and its sticky smell reach till our housing area. These are not only affecting to people's health but

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seriously spoil our city image. I hope you will take the necessary action on

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issue as soon as possible.

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, your waste collection management team should find out the root cause of

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problem and prevent

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time not to happen

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kind of situation again. Kind regards, Yan

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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