Even though there is a popular agreement that
advertising directed towards young
aged
to
should be allowed to keep them entertained, I have a different opinion. I totally disagree with
. I feel
way for
reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
with, it is critically important to inhibit
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to
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advertising because the
cannot distingue if the advertisements are exaggerated which can lead to accidents. Some advertisements only want to sell their products without thinking about safety. My personal experience is a compelling example of
. About 10 years ago, my relative wanted to buy a
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outfit because he thought he would jump like a
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and when he got the outfit, in the beginning, he started jumping on the table. Unfortunately, one day he jumped from upstairs to downstairs.
,
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him
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an accident by breaking his legs. He needed to stay in a hospital for almost a month and missed school. I am sure if his parent had not let him watch
advertising,
situation would not have happened.
, avoiding
aged
to
watching
is greater than watching because
do not know what is the reality of just the performance.
Another obvious reason is that some families have a financial problem that they are not able to afford toys because toys are expensive to be safe for the
, so they always produce
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good material.
, One of my friends, she has 2
. She always
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her
watch
. She kept telling me that when the big sister wanted the doll toy, the little boy wanted the car toy
because they
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jealous.
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exhausted because she is a
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mom ,so her husband is the only one who earns money.
, I gave her some advice that tried not to let the
watch
because
influences the
that they are not able to distingue.
, letting the
watch
will make
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financial become unstable.
In conclusion, for all the reasons stated above, I encourage all parents
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not be
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aged
to
to watch
advertising. If they do
,
they will discover for themselves that avoiding
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will
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countless number of reducing
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financial
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and
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medical emergency
situationFix the agreement mistake
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.