Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television advertising directed towards young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

Even though there is a popular agreement that

television

advertising directed towards young

children

aged

two

to

five

should be allowed to keep them entertained, I have a different opinion. I totally disagree with

this

. I feel

this

way for

two

reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.

To begin

with, it is critically important to inhibit

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children

age

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aged

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two

to

five

watching

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television

advertising because the

kids

cannot distingue if the advertisements are exaggerated which can lead to accidents. Some advertisements only want to sell their products without thinking about safety. My personal experience is a compelling example of

this

. About 10 years ago, my relative wanted to buy a

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outfit because he thought he would jump like a

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and when he got the outfit, in the beginning, he started jumping on the table. Unfortunately, one day he jumped from upstairs to downstairs.

Moreover

,

this

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him

got

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an accident by breaking his legs. He needed to stay in a hospital for almost a month and missed school. I am sure if his parent had not let him watch

television

advertising,

this

situation would not have happened.

Therefore

, avoiding

children

aged

two

to

five

watching

television

is greater than watching because

kids

do not know what is the reality of just the performance. Another obvious reason is that some families have a financial problem that they are not able to afford toys because toys are expensive to be safe for the

kids

, so they always produce

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good material.

For instance

, One of my friends, she has 2

kids

. She always

let

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her

kids

watch

television

. She kept telling me that when the big sister wanted the doll toy, the little boy wanted the car toy

also

because they

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jealous.

This

made my friend

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exhausted because she is a

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mom ,so her husband is the only one who earns money.

Furthermore

, I gave her some advice that tried not to let the

kids

watch

television

because

television

influences the

kids

that they are not able to distingue.

As a result

, letting the

kids

watch

television

will make

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financial become unstable. In conclusion, for all the reasons stated above, I encourage all parents

should

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not be

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children

aged

two

to

five

to watch

television

advertising. If they do

this

,

then

they will discover for themselves that avoiding

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television

will

have

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countless number of reducing

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financial

problem

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and

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medical emergency

situation

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.