More and more parents are allowing their children to play on computers and tablets as they think that children should learn technology skills. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

It is generally acknowledged that youngsters tend to increasingly use electronic devices

such

as

computers

and tablets in

this

contemporary society as their parents permit

this

trend in order to increase

children

's technological ability. Regarding

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, I strongly believe that the benefit of

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trend

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the drawback. On the one hand, some populations

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that using PC for an excessive amount of time by

children

decreases social interaction, thereby leading to disruption of growth. Since a significant number of kids focus on the tiny screen all day, they do not communicate and play with peers in person. What is more,

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sedentary

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with laptops interfere with growth

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For example

, recent media reports that almost 10% of young

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have a tendency that their heights and weights are smaller than other ones. As the example clearly illustrates, consumption of too much time on

computers

disrupts

children

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adaquately

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adequately

.

On the other hand

, learning about technology plays a key factor in adaption in

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world. Not only can gaining technological skill be helpful for studying remotely in foreign countries, but it may

also

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chances to experience various content indirectly through the Internet.

For instance

, a survey conducted by the Korea Educational Foundation has revealed that pupils who have owned

computers

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an early age become more knowledgeable than other mates.

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, it is reasonable to point out that they can have more chances to adapt

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society than others who do not have used

computers

. In conclusion, while I accept that

children

who use electronic apparatus too much can sometimes be antisocial, thereby leading to a delay of growth, there is no doubt to point out that the advantage is way higher than the disadvantage.

However

, I recommend that when

children

use items

such

as tablets, they need to be monitored by

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guardians

.