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the alteration of the layout of a university’ s sport centre as it is now and the plan in the future.

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The given maps illustrate the alteration of the layout of a university’s sports centre as it is now and the plan in the future. Overall, there are noticeable changes after the construction take place and the significant changes can be seen in the addition of extra facilities. Presently, there are
two
 outdoor courts on the west and the east of the building. The entrance is located to the south, which is the reception is
right
 after
this
. The 25 meters pool is there in the centre, to the east of which is a seating area while changing room is there towards the west. The gym occupied the whole on the back wall. There will be enormous changes in the future, the
two
 outdoor courts will be removed to make way for the extension of the building. No change will be to the entrance, the pool, the original changing room and the seating, while the gym will be certain in its place but its size will be bigger. On the
right
,
two
 dance studios will be there. The additional leisure pool will be added towards the west of the building. There will be
two
 new changing rooms,one will be in the front
right
 corner, whereas another will be in the front left corner. A cafe will be constructed on the
right
 side of the entrance, while on the opposite side will be a sports shop.
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