WRITING TASK 2 Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older? Write 250 words.

Eventough

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Even though

, for some parent, fulfilling

the

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children

's wishes become a source of happiness, I believe it will bring unwanted impact on their

future

life,

therefore

I regard it as

a

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worst way to raise a child.

Children

need to learn about how to differentiate between necessity and wants

,

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so that in the

future

, they can prioritise goods they need over goods they want. Even for some

adult

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,

this

decision may still

becoming

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become

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a hard choice.

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is what had happened in a village in Indonesia, when the land

are

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needed by the government for an

infrastucture

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infrastructure

project, the people in the village received

large

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sum of money for compensation.

However

, because of lacking the skill to choose what they really need and what they do not,

this

large fortune

are

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dissipated in a flash.

Therefore

, they are now

come

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back

at

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their initial financial state, as

a

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lower income citizens

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lower income

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lower-income

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citizens.

Therefore

, in order to not

becoming

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such

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an adult

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adult

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adults

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in the

future

, the

children

need to learn how to restrain their

want

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wants

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and focus on fulfilling their needs only. It is achieved by giving explanation when

children

request toys, snacks, which is actually not needed by them. With

this

kind of restriction, accompanied by logical explanation,

childred

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children

will be familiar with

this

decision making.

Therefore

in the

future

, they will ask themself, do

i

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really need

this

? Do the benefit of buying

this

thing outweigh the price

i

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have to pay?

Therefore

, they will become an efficient generation in the

future

. To sum up, teaching

children

to restrain their

unecessary

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unnecessary

necessary

desire, accompanied by logical explanation, is a better way to raise

children

than fulfilling whatever they want, as it

train

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them to become an adult who

use

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their logic when facing

with

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every problem to decide.