Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people,however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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While many people argue that economic development is the most essential goal, some of them suppose that many different kinds of

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need more attention from governments. I completely agree with the latter opinion. There are some reasons why economic growth is the crucial goal for many countries. The government tends to focus on developing job opportunities and a high level of employment because from

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, a

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will gain much income from locals.

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, they can use that funds to improve other problems like facilities or an unexpected depression of the economy in difficult circumstances like a covid pandemic.

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, from

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development, a government with higher revenues can invest in the

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's infrastructure and other public services.

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, I believe a concentration on investing in various kinds of

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is as significant as the economic one.

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, the most noticeable problem is the locals' health.

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is a long term problem that will have a big impact on other issues like the economy.

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, if companies urge their employees to work hard and do not have the support and necessary assistance in mental health and relaxation time, employees' productivity will decrease significantly.

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, in order to develop a

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in many aspects, education is

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an important one. Giving children those helpful lessons, moral values and social norms is

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a way to improve a

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successfully. With the things that they learn from biology,

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, maths, children are the key

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's improvement in hospitals, architecture and technology when they are mature. In conclusion, economic

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is an important goal for many governments because of its benefits;

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, I believe that the other issues

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need assistance and investigation equally.

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Topic Vocabulary:

standard of living
sustainable development
social equality
environmental degradation
cultural heritage
technological innovation
wealth disparity
human development index
holistic approach
quality of life
economic prosperity
healthcare system
education system
cultural diversity
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