You have been working with your company for two years and are interested in a promotion. Write a letter to your direct boss. In your letter: · Explain your varied achievements over the past two years · Express your interest in growing with the company · Ask for a meeting to discuss a potential promotion
Dear
Mr.
Akhilesh,
I am a sales representative for your organization, and my ID number is DXB2689. Change the punctuation
Mr
This
letter is being sent to call your attention to my promotion.
I have successfully finished two years as a junior sales promotion with this
company. All of my
monthly goals that my superiors set for me were met. Change the pronoun
the
Furthermore
, the company's products are in high demand in the market as a result
of my effective marketing plan. Because of this
, management chose me as the best employee of the month for the previous year.
I am very eager to put in long hours and strive to enhance the company's product on an international level. I made a significant contribution to the firm's annual earnings rise. As a result
, I am anticipating my promotion to senior status based on my abilities.
I'd like to have a meeting with you at your earliest convenience to discuss my performance. This
may assist you in deciding which job in your organization you should nominate me for.
I'd appreciate it if you could look into this
right away.
Yours sincerely,
Nithisha
Correct your spelling
Natasha
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- thirdly
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- although
- even though
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