You have been working with your company for two years and are interested in a promotion. Write a letter to your direct boss. In your letter: · Explain your varied achievements over the past two years · Express your interest in growing with the company · Ask for a meeting to discuss a potential promotion

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Akhilesh, I am a sales representative for your organization, and my ID number is DXB2689.

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letter is being sent to call your attention to my promotion. I have successfully finished two years as a junior sales promotion with

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company. All of

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monthly goals that my superiors set for me were met.

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, the company's products are in high demand in the market

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of my effective marketing plan. Because of

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, management chose me as the best employee of the month for the previous year. I am very eager to put in long hours and strive to enhance the company's product on an international level. I made a significant contribution to the firm's annual earnings rise.

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, I am anticipating my promotion to senior status based on my abilities. I'd like to have a meeting with you at your earliest convenience to discuss my performance.

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may assist you in deciding which job in your organization you should nominate me for. I'd appreciate it if you could look into

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right away. Yours sincerely,

Nithisha

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Natasha

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

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in additional
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

184 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Companies that use fossil fuels should be taxed more than companies that use green energies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Describe a science subject (Biology, Robotics, etc.) that you are interested in.

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