Due to growth of population many people live in apartments with limited space and no outdoor areas. Do this trend advantages of outweigh disadvantages?
Most
people
in the community tend to live in apartel with no outdoor areas and small space
. There are many pros and cons of Fix the agreement mistake
spaces
this
situation and this
essay will analyse the difference. In the present world today, living in a small space
can be beneficial in person because of the need for personal space
and the negative effect causing the persons' social life.
First
, there are people
who have the ability to live alone in a tiny house because they felt the need of being alone. Moreover
, they are introverted individual and does not mingle with other people
thus
separating themselves. Furthermore
, living in an apartment with limited space
can be enjoyable for people
starting in life because they may think it is a stepping stone with their dreams. For instance
, the new
graduated students who wanted to separate from their parents and live on their own.
Change the adjective
newly
On the other hand
, there are adverse effects in living without outdoor areas because it can hinder intersocial activities. Having a small area can be problematic in terms of gatherings for the place cannot be used. Areas with no outdoors can have adverse consequences in mind conditioning because seeing only blank space
and well-being can cause a negative effect also
. For example
, a person needs to have good scenery to think properly according to some research.
In conclusion, do it outweigh the advantages, it will boil down to the individual,
because some enjoy living in small Remove the comma
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space
for own space
and the disadvantage of social life can hinder.Submitted by brainfreeze on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...