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These days, cell (mobile) phones and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, there is no doubt how the advancement in modern technology improves the lives of
people
, especially when it comes to the social aspect. In
this
 essay, the advantages and disadvantages of using the
ineternet
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internet
 and mobile
phones
 will
de
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discussed
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. The main benefit of utilizing the
internet
 and mobile
phones
 has greatly improved social communication amongst
people
. The development of the different social networking applications,
for instance
, Facebook and Instagram
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 helped
people
 ensure connectedness with each other.
This
applications
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application
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 has installed different programs like
videocalls
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video calls
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 and voice messages anyone could
use
 with the
use
 of the
internet
 or mobile
datas
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data
. Even though coming from different time zones and in different areas, individuals can see each other by the
use
 of
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 software applications.
However
, others would see the drawbacks
on
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 the
use
 of mobile
phones
 and
internet
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the internet
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.
Firstly
, the disadvantage would on the wastage of money.
People
, nowadays, are very much fascinated with the latest trends on mobile
phones
. Once a new model arises, they would be very eager to
que
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queue
 just to purchase the product.
This
as
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 a result, would mean a lot of money just thrown at the bin. Another disadvantage would be, the dangers of the addiction
on
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this
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these
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 mobile
phones
 and the
internet
, which affects us physically and might lead to different kinds of illnesses.
For example
, the development of neurological symptoms for someone who has been addicted to mobile
phones
 can be very serious. There has been a lot of cases where users
has
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 been greatly affected by
this
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these
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 illnesses.  In conclusion,
although
 the benefits of using the
internet
 and mobile
phones
 are of so much
beneficial
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benefit
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 to an individual socially , I believe that we should always be very careful and responsible on how we utilized
this gadgets
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this gadget
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 to prevent
such
 illnesses.
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