These days, cell (mobile) phones and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, there is no doubt how the advancement in modern technology improves the lives of

people

, especially when it comes to the social aspect. In

this

essay, the advantages and disadvantages of using the

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internet

and mobile

phones

will

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discussed

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. The main benefit of utilizing the

internet

and mobile

phones

has greatly improved social communication amongst

people

. The development of the different social networking applications,

for instance

, Facebook and Instagram

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helped

people

ensure connectedness with each other.

This

applications

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has installed different programs like

videocalls

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video calls

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and voice messages anyone could

use

with the

use

of the

internet

or mobile

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data

. Even though coming from different time zones and in different areas, individuals can see each other by the

use

of

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software applications.

However

, others would see the drawbacks

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the

use

of mobile

phones

and

internet

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the internet

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.

Firstly

, the disadvantage would on the wastage of money.

People

, nowadays, are very much fascinated with the latest trends on mobile

phones

. Once a new model arises, they would be very eager to

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queue

just to purchase the product.

This

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a result, would mean a lot of money just thrown at the bin. Another disadvantage would be, the dangers of the addiction

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this

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mobile

phones

and the

internet

, which affects us physically and might lead to different kinds of illnesses.

For example

, the development of neurological symptoms for someone who has been addicted to mobile

phones

can be very serious. There has been a lot of cases where users

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been greatly affected by

this

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illnesses.  In conclusion,

although

the benefits of using the

internet

and mobile

phones

are of so much

beneficial

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to an individual socially , I believe that we should always be very careful and responsible on how we utilized

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to prevent

such

illnesses.