In some poorer areas of large cities people are too afraid to leave their houses at night time due to a fear of crime. What are the causes of crime in those areas and what can be done to tackle those problems?

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in a big city, people are scared to go out in the dark due to crime rates and

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essay will discuss the causes of

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situation and suggest ideas for the solution. Nothing

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be an excuse to perform a crime for sure but if a person

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any kind of criminal activity, we must question their motivation or reason.

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of all, fairly poorer areas in big cities cannot offer plenty of

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opportunities for habitants

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unemployment might lead

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desperately perform any kind of small crimes

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as burglary or snatching.

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to that, underdeveloped areas surely can not serve a well organized educational system to children of their residents. Without getting a proper and decent education, no one would expect students to build up a nice future with a well-paid

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learn how to behave in

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right manner within a society. There are many things

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be done in order to decrease the criminal incidents in a certain

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and most important thing to be done is to increase the

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standards of the residents. To do so, the government must take responsibility and make investments to create new

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opportunities in the area, so that criminals would not stay unemployed

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being broke and desperate won'

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be an excuse for them.

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, education must be improved in the area.

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can be performed by establishing new and modern schools and filling those schools with teachers who are good in different fields. So that students wouldn'

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any knowledge compared to their peers and they can progress and build up a future for themselves in the area of their desire.  In conclusion, criminal occasions won'

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stop in a poor neighbourhood if the residents can get equal educational of financial support like

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of the city. Government must step up and take responsibility in terms of funding these

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about these fields.