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the TV news viewing figures over a one-year period in four various time.

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The given line graph illustrates the TV
news
 viewing figures over a one-year period in four various times. Overall, the majority of
people
 viewed
news
 at 6pm and there was a
number
 of
people
 viewing
news
 at 11 am starting in May. According to the line graph, In January, the highest amount of
people
 watching the
news
 at 6 pm,with about almost millions
viewers
 per
day
;
however
 its
number
 showed a steadily fall,with a period of fluctuation, dropping to just over 3
million
viewers
 per
day
 in December.
On the other hand
, the
number
 of
viewers
 who watched the
news
 at 1 pm flattened off at approximately just over 1
million
viewers
 per
day
 throughout the year.
Furthermore
, at
first
, the figure of
news
 viewing at 9.30 am rose steeply;
however
, following June the viewing rate dropped dramatically to only 1
million
viewers
 per
day
. Over the four months, from September to December, the figure went up again to 3
million
viewers
 per
day
. It is interesting to note that there was a
number
 of
people
 watching the
news
 at 11 a.m. starting in May, accounting for around 100000
viewers
 per
day
. Following three months, its figure rose significantly to exactly 4
million
viewers
.
However
, the remaining months witnessed the
number
 fell noticeably to just under 1
million
viewers
.
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