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Although there is a lot of translation software available, learning a language still could be advantageous. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#translation #software #language
Language
translation
 software programs have gained popularity in recent times
due to
 developments in the science and technology sector.
Due to
this
 development, web-based vocabulary explanation applications have grown in the past few years. But learning a speech from a human instructor can be far
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. I agree with the statement that there are manifold benefits in learning a
language
. In the subsequent paragraphs, I shall explain why learning a
language
 from a human instructor is beneficial.
Language
translation
apps
 are becoming increasingly famous nowadays because they are free and easily accessible. But there are a variety of reasons why learning a
language
 is essential. Primarily, learning a
language
 has numerous benefits. People who speak more than one
language
 have improved memory, problem-solving and critical thinking skills and acquire the ability to multitask.
Also
, there are still certain parts of the world where internet facilities are not available.
Softwares
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 for
translation
are
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 not available in
such
 places. Learning a new
language
 becomes necessary in these scenarios.
Secondly
, the translations provided by these web-based translators are
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translations. It merely gives the meaning of the conversation and fails to provide the true essence of the sentence.
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apps
 are built in
such
 a way that they cannot understand the slang and idioms used by people in everyday life.
In contrast
, an instructor can help you understand the
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true significance of a sentence. Sometimes there are multiple meanings to one word, and
translation
apps
 fail to convey their exact meaning.
As a result
, it can cause a lot of confusion and misunderstanding. Even though web-based adaptation software are readily available and
pocket friendly
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, they fail to provide the true meaning of the sentences.
To sum up
,
translation
 tools are not reliable. It fails to provide the sentences' accurate meaning, and one should not rely on
language
translation
apps
 just because they are readily available.
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