The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The main purpose of the diagrams is to provide information about how to make frozen fish pies. It takes several steps to go from delivering the main ingredients by
trucks
to a product of frozen fish pie.
Fix the agreement mistake
truck
According to
the diagrams, the main ingredients consist of fresh salmon, peas, sauce and potatoes
. The yam are
prepared separately from others. The first step of Change the verb form
is
potatoes
is cleaning, Correct article usage
the potatoes
then
the potatoes
are peeled and cut into the slice. Thereafter
, they are cooked with boiling and before using, they are cooling
.
Meanwhile, on the other side of the manufacturing process, Wrong verb form
cooled
firstly
, the fresh salmons are brined with lemon juice and salt for at most 12 hours before it goes cooking in a steam oven. Then
, skins and bones are removed by hand and disposed of, and the salmons are visually inspected before continuing the
Change preposition
to the
next
step. The
next
step is the assembled all prepared ingredients. Prepared peas and sauce are combined with the salmons in a microwaveable container then
, it is covered with a layer of the
cooked Correct article usage
apply
potatoes
. Then
, this
container is wrapped and frozen. At this
point, they are ready for dispatch or they are maybe stored at the factory before being dispatched.Submitted by Andrea Barreto on
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