Some people think that traditional culture can be destroyed it as money making attractions to tourists. However, others believe that it is only way to save traditions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Traditional
culture
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cultures
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are shared experiences that
transferred
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from generation to generation. People have
varied
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opinion
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on
legand
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legend
cultures. Which are ruined as a
money making
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system. While some others think that it is the one and only way to protect our
culture
.
This
essay will examine both these opinions before arriving at a conclusion. On the one hand,
culture
and heritage
tourism
is a
fast growing
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and high yielding sector. Heritage
tourism
are
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mainly focused on economic benefits.
This
system creates new jobs and businesses instance, the
businesman
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businessman
invest more
money
in the business and use it as a
profit making
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system.
Moreover
,
someones
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presents
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old art forms with unskilled people to
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tourists
money
so that, it is understandable that many
pupits
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pupils
puppets
pulpits
saving
money
from
this
tourism
.
On the other
hand
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tourism
has
a
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important role in preserving
culture
today travellers are looking for visiting the historical place and searching for
amicent
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ancient
ambient
cultures. Researchers
proven
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that
this
tourism
can protect cultural heritage through community empowerment.
For example
, when tourists are educated about the history and traditions of the local community,
and
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it turns that community feels a stronger cohesion and sense of pride in that cultural history.
In addition
,
tourism based
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around cultural asset encourages locals
continue
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to pass on traditions and
practice
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practices
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that are in their history. In conclusion, many people
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there
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savings through traditional
culture
tourism
. In my view,
tourism
is
the
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one of the best
method
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to preserve it and
also
it gives visitors the opportunity to broaden
his
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own personal horizons.
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