An increasing number of professionals such as doctors and teachers are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?

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professional

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as doctors and teachers are going to work in other developed

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and leaving their poorest hometowns, it was many different reasons of them to make these decisions. In the

following

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I will discuss the points in my opinion.  On the one hand, the professionals they are going to work

in

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with in

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developed

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that may impact the services of medical will not

enough

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and the children may not get the chance in good education. The reasons

of

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them

to

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leaving their poorer

countries

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it

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the

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salaries and the facilities of work are better in developed

countries

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.

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, in developed

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countries

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the medical system is in a higher

quanilty

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quantity

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that they can learn more

knowledge

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and income are more substantial. I could say if the poorer

countries

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government can provide

housing

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allowance to encourage them to stay in hometown and support their kids to study in

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, it should be

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one of

actractive

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ways of them.

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, some professionals

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want to examine higher

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when they are working in developed

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. The doctors can go back

hometowns

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to hometowns

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to share their

knowledge

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and give some training to the medical students when they retired. And the teachers give the poorer

countries

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some foreign

knowledge

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and

techonolgy

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technology

, it

good

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for the place can study different languages and cultures. Increase the

knowledge

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that can improve the poorer

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countries

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competitiveness. In my point of view, the professionals are working in developed

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that is

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good for their future, and the poorer

countries

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government they can

provided

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some more resources to encourage them

stay

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to stay

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or go back their hometowns, that could get in both sides wins.