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An increasing number of professionals such as doctors and teachers are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?

#professionals #doctors #teachers #countries #work #situation
The arise number of
professional
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such
 as doctors and teachers are going to work in other developed
countries
 and leaving their poorest hometowns, it was many different reasons of them to make these decisions. In the
following
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 I will discuss the points in my opinion.  On the one hand, the professionals they are going to work
in
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 developed
countries
 that may impact the services of medical will not
enough
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 and the children may not get the chance in good education. The reasons
of
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 them
to
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leaving their poorer
countries
it
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might
the
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 salaries and the facilities of work are better in developed
countries
.
For example
, in developed
countries
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,countries
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 the medical system is in a higher
quanilty
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quantity
quality
 that they can learn more
knowledge
 and income are more substantial. I could say if the poorer
countries
 government can provide
housing
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 allowance to encourage them to stay in hometown and support their kids to study in
foreigns
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foreign
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, it should be
a
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one of
actractive
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attractive
 ways of them.
On the other hand
, some professionals
they
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want to examine higher
academic
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academics
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 when they are working in developed
countries
. The doctors can go back
hometowns
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 to share their
knowledge
 and give some training to the medical students when they retired. And the teachers give the poorer
countries
 some foreign
knowledge
 and
techonolgy
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technology
, it
good
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is good
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 for the place can study different languages and cultures. Increase the
knowledge
 that can improve the poorer
countries
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countries'
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 competitiveness. In my point of view, the professionals are working in developed
countries
that is
 good for their future, and the poorer
countries
 government they can
provided
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 some more resources to encourage them
stay
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 or go back their hometowns, that could get in both sides wins.
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