Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role of education of children Discuss both views and give your opinion

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system of students, while opponents claim that tutors should not give a
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. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall discuss both ideas and suggest my opinion. On the one hand, these days government pays
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attention
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system of schools and the majority of themes are become harder, compared to the past two decades. It is a heavy
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students
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to do several exercises every day in four or five subjects as a
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his interest
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subjects and his scores show a negative outcome. Some countries in the world are
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the method of educating without doing
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bright example of
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can be Japan where youngers do not perform doing
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at primary school, as adults think it is
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enough
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opportunity to digest all
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they got.
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avoiding
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home task
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, each theme taught at school need
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consolidation of material and additional exercises at
home
are beneficial to make sure schoolman that each student understood everything.
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young
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generation
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to obtain
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forceful knowledge and expands their horizons enriching their inner world.
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independent and learn
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homework
without depending on anyones' help. For
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instance
, all schools in Uzbekistan lead a trend of giving
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for students, in order to secure their cognition. To conclude, a part of
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say that children must do
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task
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, while others think it is not necessary for elements of education.
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However
, I believe that each child should receive information, but in a limited number for developing his
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intellect
and not burden him in parallel
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  • Reinforcement
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