Some people think that it is the responsibility of governments to take care of the environment, while others believe that it is the responsibility of the citizens. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is undeniable that nowadays humanity faces a plethora of unprecedented environmental

problems

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, and people hold different views about whether these

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should be solved by the

authorities

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or

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is the responsibility of

individuals

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.

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the

government

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can lessen environmental degradation by imposing stricter laws and promoting awareness, I am inclined to believe that

individuals

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can bring greater

contribution

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through

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change

of

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their daily

routine

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. The

government

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, taking into account

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tremendous power it possesses, may exert an influence on environmental degradation through laws and fines.

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, if appropriate laws are introduced,

individuals

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with a rather careless attitude towards the seriousness of environmental disasters

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may be prevented from harming

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nature by the fear of being punished by the authority. The effectiveness of

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so-called system was proven in 2019, when the US

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imposed a law, about criminal prosecution of those, who kill endangered monkey species. By the following year, the number of killed animals had reduced almost twofold.

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,

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of various awareness campaigns seems a great solution to a huge part of

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,

such

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as climate change and deforestation. Awareness schemes, introduced in educational premises may help combat

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hurdles by fostering in

individuals

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consciousness about these

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, which will definitely lead to some practical benefits in the long-term future.

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, one of

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schemes was established by

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government

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in order to reduce the amount of manifold forest fires.

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there

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no apparent benefits now,

authorities

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promised that we would see them in the future.

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of all actions that public

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can take, citizens' impact on the planet should not be overlooked.

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, each individual, regardless of whether they have a private vehicle or travel by public transportation means, has

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carbon footprint-the amount of emissions per person. The reduction of it, which depends on each citizen, leads to

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significant improvements in the quality of air, water, and life in general.

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, since

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undisposable goods are widely used, each person is responsible for diminishing

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use or even replacing these items

on

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more

environmentally-friendly

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ones,

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making the Earth less polluted. In conclusion, the public

authorities

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can vastly improve the nature and diminish the impact that certain citizens have, but I wholeheartedly believe that

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true improvement will appear only after changes in each citizen's daily habits