he maps below show the changes that have taken place in the seaside resort of Templement between 1990 and 2005.

he maps below show the changes that have taken place in the seaside resort of Templement between 1990 and 2005.
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The maps demonstrate the changes that have occurred in Templon, a seaside resort, over a
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period beginning in 1990 and ending in 2005.
Overall
, the most noticeable change is the replacement of many green areas with several major infrastructure projects.
To begin
with, there were several major changes to transport in the city. An airport has been built beside the river on the outskirts of the metropolis.
In addition
to
this
, a ferry port was constructed on the far east coastline, with a new railway line passing by the ferry port, continuing along the coast and crossing over a new bridge so it connects to the west side of the municipality. There have
also
been changes to the business sector in Templon. A factory can be seen in the southeast of the township behind the new railway line, and a supermarket has been built over the river in the west of Templon, running alongside a new road. The residential landscape has
also
altered, particularly on the west side of town, where large apartment blocks now stand in place of the houses.
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