Besides a lot of advantages, some people believe that the Internet creates many problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Write 250 words.

Nowadays, we enjoy the era of the

internet

.

People

all around the world get the benefit from it, not only

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personal

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level but

also

in a wider scope as a citizen or even as a country. Like the principle of yin and yang, everything has a good and bad side, and

this

is

also

relevant to the

internet

.

Besides

its potential, some

people

think it can do harm to

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being

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, and the threats are bigger than ever. In

this

case, I am in a position where I fully support the

using

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of the

internet

, so I strongly disagree with the

ideas

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that we have to minimize the development of the

internet

. The essay below elaborates the reason why, mainly from the economic and cultural aspects. We are all already experienced the beneficial effect of the

internet

. Because of

this

invention, the market transaction can be done in greater scope.

For instance

, we can sell anything, anywhere and anytime in the online shop, so as a seller, they can reach more potential buyers.

Although

the risk is always there, like black markets or personal information stealing

or

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,

but

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I think it's is something we can tackle.

Its

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common sense if

people

see

this

as a drawback, but if we focus on the negative side, we will be missed

alot

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a lot

of opportunities. Another benefit is in

cultural

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aspect, by the invention of

this

technology, we can socialize

borderlessly

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borderless

, like interacting with

people

from another country. By

this

, we can learn

culture

from someone that has

different

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background,

in

addition

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we can

also

promote our

culture

.

For example

, the Korean Pop lifestyle, back

then

we have little exposure

with

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this

, but because of Youtube or another online platform, we can consume

the

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movies and songs from Korea.

In

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the other hand, we can

also

promote our

culture

if we want, so they can get informed

with

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our beautiful country. But, some said that too much exposure to another

culture

can decrease our sense of belonging to

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culture

, but I think

this

idea is too pessimistic

,

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because nowadays

people

are more

openminded

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. So, In

cultural

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the cultural

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aspect, I

thinks

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internet

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the internet

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is always win

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the good side. Based on

these explanation

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, I am still and always support the development of

internet

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.

Although

its have inherent risk

like

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,

but

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the

ooportunity

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opportunity

we have is open wide if we can utilize

internet

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wisely, primarily because

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its

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benefit to our economy and

culture

. I think we will

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so much if we

didnt

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didn't

support the

internet

era.