People in all modern societies use drugs, but today’s youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologist claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example. Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.

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of the liberal arts. Certain youngsters idolise these

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and seeing them take

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in order to integrate into a certain section of the society, which is considered to be bohemian and creative, as

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which appeals to the youth.

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, little do they know the detrimental effect it has on their body and mind. One solution to the problem would be to

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not only educate students about the

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in schools and colleges

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consumption.

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. Another reason associated with

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is improper parental guidance and negligence on their own part to monitor their children and set a proper example .In certain families taking

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is taken casually and is

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promoted by the parents as they themselves might be addicted to the substance. Other times, when a certain medicine is

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