The gap between the rich and the poor is becoming wider; the rich is becoming richer, and the poor are even getting poorer. what problems can the situation cause? what can be done to reduce this gap?

There is a wide consensus among people in recent times that the distribution of
wealth
is not equitable and the privileged continue to rise, while the situation of the less privileged continues to deteriorate. Throughout
this
essay, I will explore the rise in disparity among the rich and poor in terms of
wealth
accumulation and suggest possible measures to mitigate the issue.
To begin
with, in order to gain
wealth
, a person must have access to basic
infrastructure
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,
such
as education, health care, shelter etc.
Consequently
, enabling him to build his character and get opportunities with monetary benefits.
In contrast
, the poor lack the facilities which
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provided to the rich and
hence
,cannot get
himself
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out
from
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the state of poverty. Due to financial constraints, a poor person may take up an unlawful path to earn his living, which might lead to an increase in crime and have a detrimental effect on
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society. One solution to the problem
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can be the government implementing certain subsidy schemes for education, healthcare and other primal facilities for the
poverty stricken
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people
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so that they can uplift themselves from the prevalent conditions. Another consequence of the widening gap between the rich and the poor
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is the negative impact on the progress of a country. If economic growth is not inclusive and the
wealth
is clustered in a few
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of the society
then
the GDP ( gross domestic product) will be impacted. One way of resolving the issue
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is by having certain incentive
shemes
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schemes
in place by public bodies for the rich to create jobs and invest in certain funds for the
wellfare
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welfare
of the people with lesser benefits.
As a result
, there will be a "trickle
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" effect of
wealth
leading to wholesome growth. In conclusion, if the poor are not enabled and empowered to get out of their depleted state of living
then
it can have dire consequences for
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global human progress.
Hence
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believe that proper policies and measures must be in place by global institutions, paving the path for a progressive living for everyone.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • economic disparity
  • crime rates
  • wealth inequality
  • social segregation
  • education gap
  • affluent
  • mortality rates
  • uneven access
  • hopelessness
  • disenfranchisement
  • progressive taxation
  • redistribute
  • quality education
  • social programs
  • economic disadvantage
  • higher wages
  • entrepreneurship
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