Students in school or university learn more from classes of teachers than other resources (e.g. Internet or TV), do you agree or disagree?

In
this
era of technological innovation, there are thousands of education sources on the
internet
or TV.
However
,
students
in university or school prefer to learn only from
teachers
compared to other resources. I totally disagree with
this
idea and
this
essay will point out some of my perspectives with relevant reasons.
First
of all, learning only from books and
teachers
became a habit for every student.
In addition
,the majority of
students
rely on
teachers
whether they have some difficulties with their lessons. In
this
way, they lose their self-esteem and confidence. What is more, they do not dare to study alone because they are afraid of making mistakes.
As a result
, they only know their
teachers
' ideas in a certain way. On the one hand, information from
internet
websites and television include different ideas from different people.
Moreover
,
students
can study themselves at their favourite time only if they have
internet
. There is no doubt that it can
also
improve your research skill because children have to search everything on google on their own.
Besides
, different types of questions related to a certain topic can be
also
learned as general pieces of knowledge. To sum up, as far as I am concerned, it would be a pity if
students
are not using the
internet
and television as educational platforms in
this
century.
This
is because they can bring details and
also
improve
students
' technological skills.
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