In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Education is one of the major crucial factors that persons from different walks of life wanted to procure in their entire life and
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reading
books
and newspapers are the basic foundations for them to grasp a profound knowledge. I believe that
internet
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could help others in obtaining
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for them to read,
however
, I do concur that printed newspapers or
books
are the
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and accessible to all humanity around the globe. On the one hand, parents are more preferred to utilize printed materials
such
as
books
and they are aiming to purchase
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for their precious offspring to show and illustrates
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first
reading skills. Most of the time, they are immensely excited
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teaching their children the basic strategies of reading. Whereas, online forms of
books
may jeopardize the vision health of their child because of radiation.
Thus
, an immediate family will patronize the
books
from the store unlike reading it
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online which they are paying at the same time.
On the other hand
, country folks residing in the
third
world country will give priority to the available
books
and magazines in the city library due to the fact that it is free of charge.
Likewise
, it is the opportunity of students from destitute families to amass the foundation of education due to its accessibility.
Consequently
, those individuals will embrace the physical reading materials
in contrast
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area of Africa which they are basically relying
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the
books
donation of United Nations. As a corollary, any forms of reading materials are imperative to all;
however
, purchasing printed
books
and accessibility of it in the library are essential to maintain the eye health of the reader and helped the unfortunate, unlike reading via online anyone could acquire radiation and causes
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effect to the health of a person at the same time.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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