Some people think that children who spend a lot of time reading children’s story books are wasting their time which could be better used doing other more useful activities. To what extent do you agree?

It is often claimed that reading kids' storybook is an unnecessary activity for the
children
and they should spend their
time
on other tasks
instead
. I completely disagree that reading storybooks are
time
-wasting as it helps
children
to improve their
intellect
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ability as well as their sympathy.
First
of all, reading is a significant activity for the
brain
work,
therefore
it has to get used to since we are in childhood. Storybooks introduce some stories with different tales which are interesting for the
children
and is essential as they stimulate their
brain
to visualize the situation based on the story.
For example
, when I read
a
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fiction
of
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crocodiles and the monkey which tells about a clever monkey who wants to pass the river by tricking the crocodiles, I imagine how the way the monkey is talking and walking. The record of
this
story lasts in my memory because of its interesting plot.
That is
the evidence that reading storybooks would improve memory and our
brain
ability.
Secondly
, I believe that reading a storybook could stimulate
children
's emotions and help them experience different kinds of feelings. As long as scion
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spend too much
time
reading it, book stories would be beneficial to their mental health; so they have to be controlled to prevent an addiction activity.
In particular
, a story of the little red riding hood, a popular legend when I was a child, taught us to face our fear,
also
to show how to help people without any doubt. It’s amazing to be able to control our feeling from an early age as it leads to emotional intelligence. In conclusion, It seems to me that reading
children
’s book stories is not wasting
time
since it would help the
brain
and emotional ability to be improved.
However
,
children
should always be monitored while reading a book so that they can use their
time
wisely.

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