Some people think that children who spend a lot of time reading children’s story books are wasting their time which could be better used doing other more useful activities. To what extent do you agree?

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It is often claimed that reading kids' storybook is an unnecessary activity for the
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and they should spend their
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on other tasks
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. I completely disagree that reading storybooks are
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-wasting as it helps
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to improve their
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ability as well as their sympathy.
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of all, reading is a significant activity for the
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work,
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it has to get used to since we are in childhood. Storybooks introduce some stories with different tales which are interesting for the
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and is essential as they stimulate their
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to visualize the situation based on the story.
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, when I read
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fiction
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crocodiles and the monkey which tells about a clever monkey who wants to pass the river by tricking the crocodiles, I imagine how the way the monkey is talking and walking. The record of
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story lasts in my memory because of its interesting plot.
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the evidence that reading storybooks would improve memory and our
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ability.
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, I believe that reading a storybook could stimulate
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's emotions and help them experience different kinds of feelings. As long as scion
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reading it, book stories would be beneficial to their mental health; so they have to be controlled to prevent an addiction activity.
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, a story of the little red riding hood, a popular legend when I was a child, taught us to face our fear,
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to show how to help people without any doubt. It’s amazing to be able to control our feeling from an early age as it leads to emotional intelligence. In conclusion, It seems to me that reading
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’s book stories is not wasting
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since it would help the
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and emotional ability to be improved.
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,
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should always be monitored while reading a book so that they can use their
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wisely.

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