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Some people say that physical exercise should be a required part of every school day. Others believe the students should spend their whole school da on academics. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

#people #exercise #part #school #students #academics
Now a days
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, health and physical
exercise
plays
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 a major role in
students
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students'
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 life. Many people opine that the
students
 should spend their whole
school
 day on academic studies.
However
, some
peoples
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 said that the
phsical
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physical
excercise
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exercise
 should be a required part of every
school
.
This
 essay will delve into both these arguments before reaching an opinion. On the one side, there are clear arguments against people who say
students
 should focus on academic studies during
the
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school
 time.
On
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 begin with,
phsical
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physical
exercise
 is
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an
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as
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 essential part of education. Because, after doing the
students
 will feel fresh and his body will be fit.
Exercise
 makes the student stress less and
also
students
 can their sports skill and improve the body.
On the other hand
, there are many parents who believe that their children need to study only in
academic
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 for the whole day. Of course,
students
 were go to
school
 for learning. Some might
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thing
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think
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 it is not essential to
exercise
 period. It will waste of time
in
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which
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the
students
 have
for
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studing
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studying
. To sum up, physical
exercise
have
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 many
benefit
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 for
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children's
childrens
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 health. I support that the
school
 should have
exercise
 period
in
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school
 hours. It helps them mentally and physically.
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