In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
Although
these days agriculture
has developed quickly
than past, a lot of Correct quantifier usage
more quickly
people
still are struggle
with starvation. In the essay, I will explain the reasons caused the situation and give some Change the verb form
are struggling
solution
to improve Fix the agreement mistake
solutions
this
issue.
The first
reason is the imbalance between regional agricultural development. The climate, altitude, even the distance far away from river
or other main water resources made every place has different conditions for Add an article
the river
a river
agriculture
. One of the most significant case
is Change to a plural noun
cases
African
area, due to its climate, most Correct article usage
the African
of
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apply
crops
can not be cultivated here, so even Add an article
the crops
other
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another
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worldwide
world wide
has the advances made in Correct your spelling
worldwide
agriculture
, these countries have not. That make
those Change the verb form
makes
people
live
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who live
in
there do not have enough corps to meet their needs. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, the imbalance between agriculture
development and population expansion is another cause of people
are suffering in
hunger, Change preposition
from
such
as India which has the largest population in the world and has good
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a good
the good
condition
for Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
cultivate
plants.
To release the situation, a single country Change the verb form
cultivating
do
not have Change the verb form
does
ability
to fix it, all the governments and international institutions need Change the article
the ability
have
a sharing policy aim Fix the infinitive
to have
for
Change preposition
to
prevent
Change the verb form
preventing
people
from going hungry. For instance
, having a reasonable export and import system to help those country
Change the determiner
that country
those countries
which
can not make Correct pronoun usage
that
its
citizens have enough food alone. Correct pronoun usage
their
Then
, its own authorities should encourage their people
to learn high-tech for agriculture
and promote those technology
widely, like using machines to sow or cultivate crops Change the determiner
that technology
those technologies
instead
of by
hands and raise their awareness of each career is same essential for society.
In conclusion, I reiterate my belief that the imbalance of different Correct your spelling
my
area
caused large Fix the agreement mistake
areas
people
still in hunger, and the whole world and those countries are
suffering Correct pronoun usage
that are
in
those issues need to work together to fix Change preposition
from
this
problem.Submitted by baozilyn on
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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic
Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.
You essay structure should look something like this:
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – Problems
- Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
- Conclusion
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- One of the first problems of the...
- Another problem that needs to be considered...
- A possible solution to this problem would be...
- One immediate practical solution is to...