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Current and future plan of an airport is illustrated in the picture below. It is shown that the redevelopment that will be finished by the
next
 year, will add some
parts
 like a sky-train and additional gates as well as a
bag-drop
 and an ATM to the overall design. As can be seen, the new figure of Southwest Airport possesses 18 gates which are supported by a sky train. The
parts
 customs, passport control, and
security
 remain without a special change, but some shops will set in the back of the
security
 part. It is planned to add a car-hire, an ATM and a Cafe into the arrival hall as well as a
bag-drop
 in the departure saloon. Having said that the location of the existing Cafe and check-in part will change. Current and future plan of an airport is illustrated in the picture below. It is shown that the redevelopment that will be finished by the
next
 year, will add some
parts
 like a sky-train and additional gates as well as a
bag-drop
 and an ATM to the overall design. As can be seen, the new figure of Southwest airfield possesses 18 doors which are supported by a sky train. The
parts
 customs, passport control, and
security
 remain without a special revolution, but some shops will be set in the back of the
security
 section. It is planned to add a car-hire, a cash machine and a Cafe into the arrival hall as well as a
bag-drop
 in the departure saloon. Having said that the location of the existing cafeteria and check-in lot will shift.
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