Some people think that the detailed criminal description on newspaper and TV has bad influences, so this kind of infornation should be restricted on the media. To what extend do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words
In recent days, one of the mainstream media's strategies to grab the audience's attention has been the use of detailed
crime
reports. It has been suggested that such
information
should be strictly controlled, if not outright banned. In my opinion, I totally agree with this
. There are two reasons for my opinion.
At first
, it is undeniable that these messages disproportionately affect children who lack of
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and awareness. Today, thanks to the development of Correct your spelling
knowledge
information
technology, children have easy access to information
. Due to their vulnerable state of mind and inexperience, they can not protect themselves from this
bad information
and are able to stimulate it. Seriously, if kids read or watch to
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crime
reports, it seems like normal behavior
that they can use to solve future problems.
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Second
, equally important, profiling criminals
in too much
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details
is like teaching potential Fix the agreement mistake
detail
criminals
how to handle similar cases in the future. Although
the original purpose of crime
is to warn people about it and teach them how to protect themselves, crime
can learn from it. You can learn not only how the police investigate, but also
how other people commit crimes. New research shows that most criminals
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criminal's
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report
about crimes, even political detectives.
To sum up, violence in the media, including the detailed portrayal of Fix the agreement mistake
reports
criminals
, has a negative impact on society. Legislation should be public, strictly controlled if not prohibited, and minimize the negative impact of such
information
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
