The best way to reduce poverty in developing countries is by giving up to six years of free education, so that they can at least read, write and use numbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Present-day most of the
countries
are still developing and some of the
nations
are below the
poverty
line because of a lack of facilities like
health
,
education
and a proper government system.To reduce the
poverty
in developing
countries
giving free
education
for up to 6 years is not the best way to reduce the
poverty
.I partially agree with the statement.Because giving free
education
cannot bring
growth
to
countries
,
First
and foremost not only
education
but
also
giving proper employment and
health
care to society which helps the nation.
Education
plays a crucial role because when the country has full of
education
and skilful people which help the
nations
to grow rapidly.By simply giving free
education
is not only the solution the government should provide they can give or spend some
money
in to get a quality
education
to children or youngsters which help them to gain knowledge and the skills can be help in increase the economic
growth
.
For example
, Singapore is a developed country because every citizen in the country provides them with
a
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quality
education
and free
education
for their citizens.
On the other hand
,when the
countries
have a strong relationship with some
nations
if the government can build a relationship with some of the developed
countries
so it can help them to decrease their
poverty
.like exporting and importing the materials or metals so that state can make
money
by selling them ,
However
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this
can help us our
nations
to increase the
growth
in every sector like
health
and transport .
Then
the
countries
can use
this
financial
money
into proper schooling which can help the
nations
to decrease
poverty
. In conclusion, according to me the statement which I was giving when the
countries
having a strong relationship between some other
nations
which can help the developing
countries
.So that they become well in financial and economic
growth
,by spending
this
money
in major sectors like
education
,
health
and transportation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • poverty alleviation
  • functional literacy
  • numeracy skills
  • educational opportunity
  • employment prospects
  • critical thinking
  • empowerment
  • inequality reduction
  • sustainable development
  • innovation
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