Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is commonly argued by some that, in
the
recent Correct article usage
apply
years
Change to a genitive case
year's
years'
people
have a
significant number of options. I totally agree with Add a missing verb
had a
this
statement because,
in the modern world there are too many Remove the comma
apply
types
of food and entertainment choices
available.
First
of all, in the modern age
a significant number of food Add a comma
,age
types
are reachable thanks to agricultural advancements and develepments
in Correct your spelling
developments
development
transportation
sector. The farming industry has developed especially in the Add an article
the transportation
last
decade with the innovations in genetics, and agricultural products became more resistant to different weather conditions. As a
result
different Add a comma
,result
types
of vegetables or fruits are grown in every season. For example
, people
can find strawberries in every market even in winter. Furthermore
, with the help of huge
transportation web around the Correct article usage
a huge
world
even epidemic fruits limited in a small part of the world can be found in distant areas. Add a comma
,world
For instance
, however
, there is
no mango farms in Turkey, Change the verb form
are
people
can find it in big groceries.
Other
important sector that provides Change the wording
Another
tremendous
number of Change the article
a tremendous
the tremendous
choices
to customers is entertainment
sector, with the help of Correct article usage
the entertainment
internet
and social media. Correct article usage
the internet
Invention
of Add an article
The invention
internet
expanded Correct article usage
the internet
people
's choices
in all types
of art,
because Remove the comma
apply
people
can easily access the electronic version of music or book which gives them many options. For instance
, in the past, people
in Turkey had to wait at least two months to find a copy of an American writer's new novel. However
, today you can easily access even
Correct pronoun usage
it even
in
the release day on Change preposition
on
internet
. Add an article
the internet
Secondly
, social media is another significant factor that created different art options, because it is a platform that allows amateurs to share their music or movies directly with their audience, and this
also
creates many choices
. For example
, on YouTube
there are millions of amateur musicians you can listenAdd a comma
,YouTube
.
In conclusion, I fully agree thatChange preposition
to.
,
today Remove the comma
apply
people
have much more choices
than ever before especially in food
and entertainment sectors. Correct article usage
the food
This
is mainly because of technological and scientific advancement in both of those sectors.Submitted by alperyataganbaba on
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