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In the future all cars ,buses and trucks will be driveless.The only people travalling inside these vehicles will be passengers . Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicle outweigh the disadvantages?

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In modern society, sophisticated advanced technologies are increasingly changing our lifestyles. One of the obvious changes is
driverless
cars
.
This
 change will impact both good and bad in our society.
However
, I firmly support that the idea is more advantages than disadvantages. On the one hand, as modern technology improve, people are experiencing employment shortages because technology is replacing machines
instead
 of
humans
. To give a clear example, nowadays, private
cars
 driving with artificial intelligence help are growing in the market more and more. No one can foresee that in the future, all vehicles
such
 as private
cars
, commercial trucks and public buses are completely transformed to
driverless
. If
this
 idea became in reality, most people who are related to transportation will be lost their jobs. It will become a controversial issue for the government to solve.
On the other hand
, technology can reduce the problems related to
humans
 error.
Moreover
, machine estimation is more accurate than human mind calculation.
Therefore
, these idea applies to transportation becomes less occurring road accidents and improving traffic safety.
In addition
, automated driving
cars
 provide
humans
 with comfortable smooth journeys. In public transport
system
 using
driverless
 buses, the timing of arrival and departure will be more precise.
Driverless
 commercial delivery trucks are far more productive than normal traditional
system
 because it reduces
humans
 involvement. Drivers are required to rest on their trips but machines are not.
Thus
, the machine operation
system
 improves lots of our daily needs. To conclude, there are pros and cons whatever it is. I completely support the statement that a
driverless
 vehicle
system
 has more advantages than disadvantages.
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