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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map illustrates the information about two planning sites for a new
school
 that will be established in Canterbury The general overview is that there are two areas for planning the new
school
 in Canterbury. The
first
plan
 is located in the countryside, while the
second
plan
, the
school
 will be constructed at the centre of the
town
. As we have seen, the
first
plan
 for constructing a new
school
 will be located in the countryside which is far away from Sturry
town
 5 kilometres (population: 7,000). There is located near the main road which is convenient to transport as well.
Moreover
, the
school
 is not located far away from the university
that is
 located in the north too much when compared with the
second
area
 to construct the
school
 For the
second
plan
, the new
school
 will be located in the centre of
Centerbury
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Canterbury
, so it means that there has a large amount of housing around the
school
.
Although
, there is located in the centre of the
town
. There is no traffic zone in
this
area
, so it is not convenient for parents who do not have private cars.
Moreover
, the
school
 will be constructed far away from Chartham about 7 kilometres which have a population
around
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 4,500 people. While
this
area
 is located in the south part of the
town
, so there will far from the university than the
first
 planning
area
.
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