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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling if for government to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

#people #waste #home #government #requirement #laws
Nowdays
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,there are more and more people who cannot reasonable
use
 of
waste
 in recycling ,But there is no
cosensus
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consensus
 on how reasonable
use
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the use
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 of
waste
 in recycling
this
 end.Those who support the idea of
waste
 in recycling for
government
 to make it a legal requirement.I find it really difficult to justify
this
 argument. Of cause,
government
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the government
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 can play a vital role in the
waste
 from home is recycled,I think
bevelie
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belief
 that
government
 to make it a legal what effect
use
 of
waste
 in recycling for others,For
examle
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example
,these laws
punlish
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publish
punish
punished
 environmentally destructive activities and deter individuals and family from damaging the environment.Even if
this
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these
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 laws and actions,it does not mean obeying the law for
otehr
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other
.Since the other people do not
usd
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use
 of things in recycling,including:clothes,plastic,box.
However
,
this
 does not mean automatically that
government
 has the capability of addressing all the problems bothering our how to logical
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 of
waste
 in recycling.After all,it is less likely for the administration to focus
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on details
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 aspect
in
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 recycling,In
this
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case
,there is the need for
government
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the government
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 from individuals.The key reason
how
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 to promote
environment
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 awareness in every
countries
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 for others.And the
government
 would
that
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apply
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convert their lifestyle to more eco-friendly and low-carbon in
whole
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the whole
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 society.It
istrue
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is true
 that the contribution to ensure
use
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the use
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 of
waste
 in recycling. To conclude,I think it is a comprehensive task to
use
of
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waste
 in recycling,which needs
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apply
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cooperation and cooperation from
government
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the government
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 to individuals.I
does
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 not
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apply
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agree
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